I'm prettier than you are.
Thursday, 20 June 2002
Take a Haiku

I just read your blog. You didn't shower today? Thanks for the update.

fresh-baked at 09:39 PM
Comments

And you never will again, Don.

Offered by: Jodi on June 23, 2002 9:41 PM

Uh.

Now I don't know what to say.

I've never had a response approaching appreciation before.

Garsh!

Offered by: Don on June 22, 2002 2:40 AM

I must apologize, Don. I didn't even realize your haiku was a take on the Henny Youngman classic. Now that I'm aware of that, I must say that I appreciate (and like!) your submission.

Offered by: Jodi on June 21, 2002 6:26 PM

I know. That's why I admitted it was one of those cheap foreign made imitations. Problem is, Henny Youngman wasn't Japanese.

Offered by: Don on June 21, 2002 4:05 PM

"Imitation" is right, Don. You didn't even follow the haiku structure.

If you do haiku
You'd better count syllables
That's: Five, seven, five!

Offered by: Jodi on June 21, 2002 2:15 PM

Take my version
Of an imitation Haiku
Please

Offered by: Don on June 21, 2002 2:00 PM

::sniffs the air:: Hey, I showered!

Offered by: Scott on June 21, 2002 7:24 AM